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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-2/#comment-53192</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Oct 2009 13:31:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mark, I&#039;ve heard that from a few different people, and I agree. I am going to make a conscious effort as I move forward with shooting other fighters and events. Thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mark, I&#8217;ve heard that from a few different people, and I agree. I am going to make a conscious effort as I move forward with shooting other fighters and events. Thanks.</p>
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		<title>By: Mark W</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mark W</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Oct 2009 08:25:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Would have liked to see the crowd more, just for the narrative&#039;s sake, but I guess it&#039;s difficult when you had to have Ronnie in every shot.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Would have liked to see the crowd more, just for the narrative&#8217;s sake, but I guess it&#8217;s difficult when you had to have Ronnie in every shot.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-2/#comment-53157</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 19:02:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Whoops. Can&#039;t paste the code. sending you an email.</description>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 19:00:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-2/#comment-53155</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 19:00:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The core of my site is done in Adobe GoLive, and it was a plug-in that entered the code. It allows for six images-all of which need to reside in the main directory of your site and have the exact dimensions. I named the images generic names so I could easily replace them anytime I wanted. Here&#039;s the code. I don&#039;t know if you can simply drop this into the header of your page below the stylesheets code.


		
			
		
		
			
		
		
			
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The core of my site is done in Adobe GoLive, and it was a plug-in that entered the code. It allows for six images-all of which need to reside in the main directory of your site and have the exact dimensions. I named the images generic names so I could easily replace them anytime I wanted. Here&#8217;s the code. I don&#8217;t know if you can simply drop this into the header of your page below the stylesheets code.</p>
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		<title>By: Bjarte Edvardsen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bjarte Edvardsen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 18:33:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This comment isn&#039;t about the essay, but I&#039;ll try my luck anyways... Where did you find that html-code (I&#039;m guessing javascript?) so you can have several photographs available on the front of your website, so each time you refresh the browser there is a new one? I could really need it myself...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This comment isn&#8217;t about the essay, but I&#8217;ll try my luck anyways&#8230; Where did you find that html-code (I&#8217;m guessing javascript?) so you can have several photographs available on the front of your website, so each time you refresh the browser there is a new one? I could really need it myself&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 16:02:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Lisa - My way of putting this piece together was pretty contrived, but I was guestimating the whole process. I had never done a piece like this. I had the idea to include audio early on when I started talking to Ronnie about the project.

Here&#039;s how I did it. If someone has some ideas of how to make the process smoother, please feel free to jump in:

1) Arranged the photos into the order I wanted, exported from LR.
2) Used Quicktime to trim sections of the interview into clips of interest-be sure to name the clips something to indicate their content.
3) Set the photos into the correct order in Final Cut Pro, assigned the time for each one, set the transitions
4) Place the audio clips along the timeline as you want them, add fades, etc. 
5) export the audio as one long track
6) import the photos and audio into soundslides

Basically, I used FCP for just a mock-up of what I wanted for soundslides and to mix the audio. In the first rough cut, there were gaps in the audio, as there were more images. Each revision, I would go back to FCP and trim out images, which would mean I needed to trim out the silent spaces. Towards the end, I also cut out a bit of the audio tracks to accommodate the tighter edits, saving each revision in case I wanted to backtrack. There&#039;s probably better ways of doing this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Lisa &#8211; My way of putting this piece together was pretty contrived, but I was guestimating the whole process. I had never done a piece like this. I had the idea to include audio early on when I started talking to Ronnie about the project.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s how I did it. If someone has some ideas of how to make the process smoother, please feel free to jump in:</p>
<p>1) Arranged the photos into the order I wanted, exported from LR.<br />
2) Used Quicktime to trim sections of the interview into clips of interest-be sure to name the clips something to indicate their content.<br />
3) Set the photos into the correct order in Final Cut Pro, assigned the time for each one, set the transitions<br />
4) Place the audio clips along the timeline as you want them, add fades, etc.<br />
5) export the audio as one long track<br />
6) import the photos and audio into soundslides</p>
<p>Basically, I used FCP for just a mock-up of what I wanted for soundslides and to mix the audio. In the first rough cut, there were gaps in the audio, as there were more images. Each revision, I would go back to FCP and trim out images, which would mean I needed to trim out the silent spaces. Towards the end, I also cut out a bit of the audio tracks to accommodate the tighter edits, saving each revision in case I wanted to backtrack. There&#8217;s probably better ways of doing this.</p>
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		<title>By: lisa hogben</title>
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		<dc:creator>lisa hogben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 05:06:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Brian a BIG well done.

I think its an excellent piece, lots of very strong photos and great audio work. And a really great story that is a bit of a meditation on humanity and the roles we play..

I get a bit over the fact people don&#039;t seem to understand that multimedia is quite interactive and you can turn off the elements of captions and audio as you wish so I don&#039;t think whether people find it better with or without sound a really relevant criticism.

My only suggestion would be to expand on it more in terms of its depth in the characterization, meaning I would have liked to have heard more about what he was feeling before the fight, but hey thats all.

A great piece like I said and its definitely the way of the future. I have just been booked to do my first commissioned multi-media piece here for one of the TV channels so I am really looking forward to the process as I am so used to thinking in terms of print only...

Perhaps you might have some insight into how you directed/produced the piece?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Brian a BIG well done.</p>
<p>I think its an excellent piece, lots of very strong photos and great audio work. And a really great story that is a bit of a meditation on humanity and the roles we play..</p>
<p>I get a bit over the fact people don&#8217;t seem to understand that multimedia is quite interactive and you can turn off the elements of captions and audio as you wish so I don&#8217;t think whether people find it better with or without sound a really relevant criticism.</p>
<p>My only suggestion would be to expand on it more in terms of its depth in the characterization, meaning I would have liked to have heard more about what he was feeling before the fight, but hey thats all.</p>
<p>A great piece like I said and its definitely the way of the future. I have just been booked to do my first commissioned multi-media piece here for one of the TV channels so I am really looking forward to the process as I am so used to thinking in terms of print only&#8230;</p>
<p>Perhaps you might have some insight into how you directed/produced the piece?</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-1/#comment-53115</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 03:53:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There had been previous edits that had been on my site when I submitted initially. The final edit that is on my site now is what I submitted to you last Friday. Not sure what to think of this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There had been previous edits that had been on my site when I submitted initially. The final edit that is on my site now is what I submitted to you last Friday. Not sure what to think of this.</p>
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		<title>By: david alan harvey</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-1/#comment-53113</link>
		<dc:creator>david alan harvey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 03:41:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>BRIAN...

no...but, you would be the one to know where you had sent it before...i was originally under the impression you had just finished your edit with a collaborator and we were seeing it for the first time...but interesting for sure that at least two people said they had seen it before...odd</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>BRIAN&#8230;</p>
<p>no&#8230;but, you would be the one to know where you had sent it before&#8230;i was originally under the impression you had just finished your edit with a collaborator and we were seeing it for the first time&#8230;but interesting for sure that at least two people said they had seen it before&#8230;odd</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 02:49:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Me too, but that hasn&#039;t happened yet. When Ronnie does start taking blue-grass lessons, you better believe that I&#039;m there. 

This is not intended to be critical of anyone posting here, but an observation. I included the audio because I thought it would add a layer of information that would otherwise not be available. Even if I wrote a long intro to the story with all the info, you wouldn&#039;t be able to hear the intonation in the voice. There&#039;s sadness and regret in his voice when he talks about his fighting career and the things he has missed out on. 

The option to view the images at your own pace, without the audio is also available by clicking on the left/right arrows at the bottom of the slideshow. Including the audio gives the viewer the power to view the story as he/she wants.

Just curious about what people here think.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Me too, but that hasn&#8217;t happened yet. When Ronnie does start taking blue-grass lessons, you better believe that I&#8217;m there. </p>
<p>This is not intended to be critical of anyone posting here, but an observation. I included the audio because I thought it would add a layer of information that would otherwise not be available. Even if I wrote a long intro to the story with all the info, you wouldn&#8217;t be able to hear the intonation in the voice. There&#8217;s sadness and regret in his voice when he talks about his fighting career and the things he has missed out on. </p>
<p>The option to view the images at your own pace, without the audio is also available by clicking on the left/right arrows at the bottom of the slideshow. Including the audio gives the viewer the power to view the story as he/she wants.</p>
<p>Just curious about what people here think.</p>
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		<title>By: wendy</title>
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		<dc:creator>wendy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 02:17:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>yes,
there is clearly
a beginning, middle and end
within the story....
it felt a bit driven by the audio,
rather than the rhythm of images.....
I would love to see you further this story...
I want to see Ronnie playing music with the blues musician....
***</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>yes,<br />
there is clearly<br />
a beginning, middle and end<br />
within the story&#8230;.<br />
it felt a bit driven by the audio,<br />
rather than the rhythm of images&#8230;..<br />
I would love to see you further this story&#8230;<br />
I want to see Ronnie playing music with the blues musician&#8230;.<br />
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		<title>By: AndreaC</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-1/#comment-53099</link>
		<dc:creator>AndreaC</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 00:50:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Regarding the comments, Andrea’s contention that not every photo in an essay (yes, I know, she said film but we’re talking about a photo essay) should be breathtaking, lest we be overwhelmed, gave me pause.&quot;

Michael I very deliberately said film. I think this presentation is closer to a film than a straight photo essay because here we don&#039;t have to fill in much with our imagination. (Yes I know we do with good film) But mainly I make that comparison because of the speed of display and with the voiceover, you don&#039;t have to time to look at an image properly. The pace of film takes that on board.  The situation is the same with this work. We just don&#039;t have time to observe and enjoy the images on their own because we are busy listening to the story. So I think it&#039;s right that not all the images be strong, unless there are fewer and we have more time to see them. A strong image needs more time. Too many strong images in a presentation like this would be lost except when we can go back and look again at our own pace. So now i see that seeing them on TV wouldn&#039;t be ideal at all. Or if it were to be shown on tv, I&#039;d choose fewer images and stronger ones and allow a little more time for the viewer to absorb the image. I&#039;d include more silences in the audio as well. 

But I am not damming Brian&#039;s work. I think he&#039;s done a good job.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Regarding the comments, Andrea’s contention that not every photo in an essay (yes, I know, she said film but we’re talking about a photo essay) should be breathtaking, lest we be overwhelmed, gave me pause.&#8221;</p>
<p>Michael I very deliberately said film. I think this presentation is closer to a film than a straight photo essay because here we don&#8217;t have to fill in much with our imagination. (Yes I know we do with good film) But mainly I make that comparison because of the speed of display and with the voiceover, you don&#8217;t have to time to look at an image properly. The pace of film takes that on board.  The situation is the same with this work. We just don&#8217;t have time to observe and enjoy the images on their own because we are busy listening to the story. So I think it&#8217;s right that not all the images be strong, unless there are fewer and we have more time to see them. A strong image needs more time. Too many strong images in a presentation like this would be lost except when we can go back and look again at our own pace. So now i see that seeing them on TV wouldn&#8217;t be ideal at all. Or if it were to be shown on tv, I&#8217;d choose fewer images and stronger ones and allow a little more time for the viewer to absorb the image. I&#8217;d include more silences in the audio as well. </p>
<p>But I am not damming Brian&#8217;s work. I think he&#8217;s done a good job.</p>
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		<title>By: benroberts</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/10/brian-frank-last-round/comment-page-1/#comment-53095</link>
		<dc:creator>benroberts</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 00:04:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>all that effort for 11 seconds of fighting. i hope you asked for your money back. 

;-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>all that effort for 11 seconds of fighting. i hope you asked for your money back. </p>
<p>;-)</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 21:19:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Michael. That&#039;s was what I was wondering.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Michael. That&#8217;s was what I was wondering.</p>
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		<title>By: michael webster</title>
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		<dc:creator>michael webster</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 21:16:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brian, I&#039;m not sure I understand your question. I watched it with the audio first, since that is how it was presented. Without the audio, I would not have known it was his last fight or that he was famous but was at the stage of his career where he had become a stepping stone for up and coming fighters. 

Some of that is covered in the written statement, but I always look at the photos before reading statements and often don&#039;t read them at all. I&#039;m starting to realize that maybe I should rethink that prejudice. 

Watching it with the audio rather than without, it&#039;s likely I would have missed some of the depth to the story that good photos communicate at an abstract, wordless level because I was using my left brain to decode the words rather than just soaking up the images. But who&#039;s to say and what can you do about it anyway? Mixed media is apparently where it&#039;s at these days. As an editor, I&#039;d try to put it together in such a way as it works with or without the audio. It seems to me you&#039;ve done a pretty good job at that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brian, I&#8217;m not sure I understand your question. I watched it with the audio first, since that is how it was presented. Without the audio, I would not have known it was his last fight or that he was famous but was at the stage of his career where he had become a stepping stone for up and coming fighters. </p>
<p>Some of that is covered in the written statement, but I always look at the photos before reading statements and often don&#8217;t read them at all. I&#8217;m starting to realize that maybe I should rethink that prejudice. </p>
<p>Watching it with the audio rather than without, it&#8217;s likely I would have missed some of the depth to the story that good photos communicate at an abstract, wordless level because I was using my left brain to decode the words rather than just soaking up the images. But who&#8217;s to say and what can you do about it anyway? Mixed media is apparently where it&#8217;s at these days. As an editor, I&#8217;d try to put it together in such a way as it works with or without the audio. It seems to me you&#8217;ve done a pretty good job at that.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 20:33:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Gordon</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Gordon</p>
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		<title>By: Gordon L</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gordon L</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 20:29:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brian

I love the mission statement on your site. It is sincere and un-pretentious, which comes accross in your photographs.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brian</p>
<p>I love the mission statement on your site. It is sincere and un-pretentious, which comes accross in your photographs.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 20:22:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michael - I understand what you are saying. There were some strong images were not included because they were superfluous to the story. Those cuts were the hardest, but were necessary for a concise timeline essay. You said you watched it with and without the audio. Which came first? If you watched it with the audio first, would you have gotten the whole story? I hope the answer would be yes, and maybe with some more seasoning/experience/confidence I would be able to gauge that better myself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael &#8211; I understand what you are saying. There were some strong images were not included because they were superfluous to the story. Those cuts were the hardest, but were necessary for a concise timeline essay. You said you watched it with and without the audio. Which came first? If you watched it with the audio first, would you have gotten the whole story? I hope the answer would be yes, and maybe with some more seasoning/experience/confidence I would be able to gauge that better myself.</p>
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		<title>By: michael webster</title>
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		<dc:creator>michael webster</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 20:10:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>To my eyes and ears, this essay is a very respectable yeoman&#039;s effort both as a traditional photo essay and as one of those new-fangled photo/audio hybrids. The first time through I thought the audio really enhanced the story told by the photos. I think Brian exhibits excellent interviewing skills and then edited the audio very well to present a coherent and compelling narrative. I found some of the photos weak as standalones and was a bit concerned that those were just time-kill for the audio, but could see how they furthered the story regardless and wasn&#039;t particularly bothered. Then watching it without the audio, I thought the photos told the story better on their own. He&#039;s a fighter. He&#039;s a good guy. He&#039;s part of a loving family. He prepares for a fight. He wins. We can get that story without any words. Without the audio, the essay might have benefited from a little cold-hearted editing and I&#039;d consider putting a few more photos up front that establish he&#039;s a fighter. But essentially, I liked it either way. Good job, Brian.

Regarding the comments, Andrea&#039;s contention that not every photo in an essay (yes, I know, she said film but we&#039;re talking about a photo essay) should be breathtaking, lest we be overwhelmed, gave me pause. On one hand, I&#039;ve no problem with images that further the narrative but are somewhat less than classic compositions, but on the other I suspect that the percentage of excellent standalone images in an essay is what separates the greats from the very goods. Why shouldn&#039;t every image be spectacularly well-composed and technically awe-inspiring if it effectively furthers the narrative?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>To my eyes and ears, this essay is a very respectable yeoman&#8217;s effort both as a traditional photo essay and as one of those new-fangled photo/audio hybrids. The first time through I thought the audio really enhanced the story told by the photos. I think Brian exhibits excellent interviewing skills and then edited the audio very well to present a coherent and compelling narrative. I found some of the photos weak as standalones and was a bit concerned that those were just time-kill for the audio, but could see how they furthered the story regardless and wasn&#8217;t particularly bothered. Then watching it without the audio, I thought the photos told the story better on their own. He&#8217;s a fighter. He&#8217;s a good guy. He&#8217;s part of a loving family. He prepares for a fight. He wins. We can get that story without any words. Without the audio, the essay might have benefited from a little cold-hearted editing and I&#8217;d consider putting a few more photos up front that establish he&#8217;s a fighter. But essentially, I liked it either way. Good job, Brian.</p>
<p>Regarding the comments, Andrea&#8217;s contention that not every photo in an essay (yes, I know, she said film but we&#8217;re talking about a photo essay) should be breathtaking, lest we be overwhelmed, gave me pause. On one hand, I&#8217;ve no problem with images that further the narrative but are somewhat less than classic compositions, but on the other I suspect that the percentage of excellent standalone images in an essay is what separates the greats from the very goods. Why shouldn&#8217;t every image be spectacularly well-composed and technically awe-inspiring if it effectively furthers the narrative?</p>
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