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	<title>Comments on: michael f mcelroy &#8211; an american nightmare</title>
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		<title>By: an american nightmare &#171; il fotografo laterale &#8211; blog di Paolo Nobile</title>
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		<dc:creator>an american nightmare &#171; il fotografo laterale &#8211; blog di Paolo Nobile</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 17:02:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] da tag burn, Michael F McElroy, sanità    A proposito di burn, sono andato a guardarmi questo lavoro, drammatico ma molto bello, di Michael F McElroy pubblicato proprio su burn. Sono a conoscenza da [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Wonderful Machine Photography Blog &#187; Our Photographer Attended High School With Marilyn Manson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wonderful Machine Photography Blog &#187; Our Photographer Attended High School With Marilyn Manson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 13:33:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Burn Magazine, curated by Magnum photographer David Alan Harvey, recently showcased Michael&#8217;s emotional project about a family&#8217;s reaction to terminal [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Bjarte Edvardsen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bjarte Edvardsen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Sep 2009 22:23:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These kind of stories just aches to be told, I don&#039;t want to dwell too much on the originality. Good work with this impressively tight edit (maybe too tight), I never get the feeling that any picture are out of place, they need to be where they are. I like the way the people get introduced in the start of the essay, but the strongest photographs for me is the one with the umbrella and the one with the wheel chair in the middle of the party. It&#039;s the kind of photographs that I can relate to my own life, even if my life isn&#039;t really similar at all.

Okey, now I also read the rest of the artist statement, and it gives a much bigger depth to it. Now I understand more and I want to see more. Thanks a lot for sharing!

Bjarte</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These kind of stories just aches to be told, I don&#8217;t want to dwell too much on the originality. Good work with this impressively tight edit (maybe too tight), I never get the feeling that any picture are out of place, they need to be where they are. I like the way the people get introduced in the start of the essay, but the strongest photographs for me is the one with the umbrella and the one with the wheel chair in the middle of the party. It&#8217;s the kind of photographs that I can relate to my own life, even if my life isn&#8217;t really similar at all.</p>
<p>Okey, now I also read the rest of the artist statement, and it gives a much bigger depth to it. Now I understand more and I want to see more. Thanks a lot for sharing!</p>
<p>Bjarte</p>
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		<title>By: Thomas Bregulla</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/09/michael-f-mcelroy-an-american-nightmare/comment-page-1/#comment-49937</link>
		<dc:creator>Thomas Bregulla</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2009 20:38:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The pictures stand for themselfs, telling a very strong story. They are in a way graphic, that a empathic person can even feel. The words companion the pictures by giving background to the pictures. One day, I want to tell stories, too.
Thank you for telling this to us.

Thomas</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The pictures stand for themselfs, telling a very strong story. They are in a way graphic, that a empathic person can even feel. The words companion the pictures by giving background to the pictures. One day, I want to tell stories, too.<br />
Thank you for telling this to us.</p>
<p>Thomas</p>
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		<title>By: Petteri</title>
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		<dc:creator>Petteri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Sep 2009 21:42:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Strong piece, one of the strongest I have seen here. But not as strong as Howards love towards Sheryl. And when that four letter word is strong enough financial matters take a backseat.

All the best

Petteri</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Strong piece, one of the strongest I have seen here. But not as strong as Howards love towards Sheryl. And when that four letter word is strong enough financial matters take a backseat.</p>
<p>All the best</p>
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		<title>By: mnm</title>
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		<dc:creator>mnm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Sep 2009 07:55:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This kills me but i can&#039;t stop looking at it? there is something about his pressed shirts and slacks- something so timeless about him. He just looks like someone who was so totally unprepared for what has happened to him, and he looks so, so vunerable and so lonely. It has me in tears looking at it.
For me Michael, this is what photography is all about. This series says as much about you as it does Howard. You haven&#039;t sensationalized him, you seem to have just found some very poignant moments in the time you have spent with him. I hope Howard will be okay, and I hope you continue to make this moving work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This kills me but i can&#8217;t stop looking at it? there is something about his pressed shirts and slacks- something so timeless about him. He just looks like someone who was so totally unprepared for what has happened to him, and he looks so, so vunerable and so lonely. It has me in tears looking at it.<br />
For me Michael, this is what photography is all about. This series says as much about you as it does Howard. You haven&#8217;t sensationalized him, you seem to have just found some very poignant moments in the time you have spent with him. I hope Howard will be okay, and I hope you continue to make this moving work.</p>
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		<title>By: david_bacher</title>
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		<dc:creator>david_bacher</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 19:57:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>chrystal...I agree with you. truly a sad example of the many social ills facing American&#039;s today.

I was immediately struck by the way that the photographer captured the deepest, innermost feelings of these people. There is a strong sense of trust between the photographer and the subjects. You can look into the people&#039;s eyes and see/feel what&#039;s going on. Eyes often tell the story.

nice work.. 
and my heart goes out to this family and others suffering such hardships..</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>chrystal&#8230;I agree with you. truly a sad example of the many social ills facing American&#8217;s today.</p>
<p>I was immediately struck by the way that the photographer captured the deepest, innermost feelings of these people. There is a strong sense of trust between the photographer and the subjects. You can look into the people&#8217;s eyes and see/feel what&#8217;s going on. Eyes often tell the story.</p>
<p>nice work..<br />
and my heart goes out to this family and others suffering such hardships..</p>
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		<title>By: Valery Rizzo</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/09/michael-f-mcelroy-an-american-nightmare/comment-page-1/#comment-49776</link>
		<dc:creator>Valery Rizzo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 19:03:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Beautifully shot, especially the light in #7, but very very sad story.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Beautifully shot, especially the light in #7, but very very sad story.</p>
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		<title>By: chrystal</title>
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		<dc:creator>chrystal</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 13:42:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>it is a truly sad story, although i think it is the story of the american people and our future. our world has been driven by greed for so long that now when people are suffering many have blind eyes. oddly enough, i think you are telling the most important story, but the worst one...the most deceitful one..im not sure if we can catch it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>it is a truly sad story, although i think it is the story of the american people and our future. our world has been driven by greed for so long that now when people are suffering many have blind eyes. oddly enough, i think you are telling the most important story, but the worst one&#8230;the most deceitful one..im not sure if we can catch it.</p>
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		<title>By: JKaranka</title>
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		<dc:creator>JKaranka</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 13:19:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I thought this was very well timed in terms of politics... economic recession and health care debate hand in hand. Top marks for that. On the other hand, I think that the short essay was too commited to images of illness and suffering, maybe a bit too traditional. In that sense I thought it would have touched me more if I had seen some of their own personal photographs. Images that conveyed the dream they were pursuing and how it got hacked away. I think if this was one of a series of subprojects that focused on the text, that would be fine. I&#039;d like to see some of those people (71% of the population) who are unaware that they are a paycheck away of living under a bridge.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I thought this was very well timed in terms of politics&#8230; economic recession and health care debate hand in hand. Top marks for that. On the other hand, I think that the short essay was too commited to images of illness and suffering, maybe a bit too traditional. In that sense I thought it would have touched me more if I had seen some of their own personal photographs. Images that conveyed the dream they were pursuing and how it got hacked away. I think if this was one of a series of subprojects that focused on the text, that would be fine. I&#8217;d like to see some of those people (71% of the population) who are unaware that they are a paycheck away of living under a bridge.</p>
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		<title>By: mmcelroy</title>
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		<dc:creator>mmcelroy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 13:16:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for all of the comments!! Howard&#039;s story is not unfamiliar in this country or others. With the country in a foreclosure and health care crisis I wish more of these story were being told, we often hear the numbers on TV but rarely see a person to put a face on the story. ( i am working with two other who are in similar situations) Howard&#039;s story to me is about loss the loss of his wife, the loss of his home the loss of a connection and a life that once was, I wanted the photographs to show that loss to have that empty feeling. I myself have wondered how to show the foreclosure aspect of this? since at the moment he has not been evicted, and his electric has been turned back on ( no one knows who paid the bills it just came back on one day). the bank sale is later this month and i will be attending .. His wife Sheryl also passed away a few weeks ago, just after they renewed their wedding vows. As far as his kids, they both suffer from severe depression and he has a hard time taking care of them.  I&#039;m currently still working on his story seeing were it takes me.... I have spent some much time with Howard he&#039;s become a good friend and see him or talk to him at least once a week, he at the moment doesn&#039;t know which way to turn but he is very strong person and he will come out of this okay..

Bob, What happened to you father should never happen to anyone in this Country and our leaders should be ashamed!!! someone posted this on my facebook a couple of days ago and it reads so true &quot; No one should die because they cannot afford health care, and no one should go broke because they get sick.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for all of the comments!! Howard&#8217;s story is not unfamiliar in this country or others. With the country in a foreclosure and health care crisis I wish more of these story were being told, we often hear the numbers on TV but rarely see a person to put a face on the story. ( i am working with two other who are in similar situations) Howard&#8217;s story to me is about loss the loss of his wife, the loss of his home the loss of a connection and a life that once was, I wanted the photographs to show that loss to have that empty feeling. I myself have wondered how to show the foreclosure aspect of this? since at the moment he has not been evicted, and his electric has been turned back on ( no one knows who paid the bills it just came back on one day). the bank sale is later this month and i will be attending .. His wife Sheryl also passed away a few weeks ago, just after they renewed their wedding vows. As far as his kids, they both suffer from severe depression and he has a hard time taking care of them.  I&#8217;m currently still working on his story seeing were it takes me&#8230;. I have spent some much time with Howard he&#8217;s become a good friend and see him or talk to him at least once a week, he at the moment doesn&#8217;t know which way to turn but he is very strong person and he will come out of this okay..</p>
<p>Bob, What happened to you father should never happen to anyone in this Country and our leaders should be ashamed!!! someone posted this on my facebook a couple of days ago and it reads so true &#8221; No one should die because they cannot afford health care, and no one should go broke because they get sick.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: bob black</title>
		<link>http://www.burnmagazine.org/essays/2009/09/michael-f-mcelroy-an-american-nightmare/comment-page-1/#comment-49741</link>
		<dc:creator>bob black</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 12:09:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michael: :)))

first of all, a big congratulations on publishing the Mallinger family story. I too was deeply moved by the photographs for both photographic/emotional reasons and personal. Some of the most moving and powerful photographs wrung my heart, as given the context, we&#039;re left realing from the sadness and weight and tremendous responsibility of caring for a loved one, losing a loved one and still trying to bully up the foundations of the life that had been set in place. The photograph of Mr. Mallinger sitting on the examination table is an extraordinary one...everything that this story conveys and contains is suggested in that image: his wife&#039;s mortality, his loneliness, the weight of the burden of the circumstanes, his own mortality, his herculian strength and the expression caught in the hunch of his brows, and the his determination and will to shoulder this and to resist despair...it is an extraordinary image of a profund moment.....

Not only was i moved by their story and difficulty, but i felt the text was important too. While the focus of the image is the illness of Mrs. Mallinger, and that this entails, we do get resonances of other consequences, which sneak into the images...the extraordiary opening image, as if the House of Usher, with Mr. Mallinger and his son, the condo steeped in shadow and dreary rain slick light, sitting alone beneath the very-florida-condo painting, the dual reflection on the lanai porch....all of this suggests that what was once a support (the home) for this family, bares the risk of salvaging away....And the text absolutely contextualized for me the additional consequnces of this family&#039;s tremendous ill fortune. Actually, i did NOT want pictures that literalize the financial crisis, because once you&#039;ve offered that to us in the way of background, we see it there in the images...for example photo #6...and elsewhere, small pivots of detail, that once i knew the backstory made perfect sense...for me, a good text should never explain pictures per se, but provide either detail that is additional/supplementary or poetic reaction. I&#039;m thinkin of that remarkable story that Tom Hyde shaed with us (and was posted a A Photo Editor) about the multimple amputee in virginia. the 10,000 word essay provided additinal information that was not &#039;in the pictures&#039; but allowed us to dig further into the story of that young woman&#039;s remarkable ordeal. So too here. The most significant event is unfolding in front of our eyes, and you, as a journalist, have shared with us the additional consequences of this family&#039;s ordeal, something that not everyone would immediately understand...for me, the best of texts surves to add, to supplement, to compliment images, to offer a double narrative: that of the spoken and that of the visual....and i received both here....

I hope you continue to keep us posted on the journey that this family endures and i wish them the best. On a personal note, this story hit profoundly close to home. In 1999, my father had a major heart attack and he was uninsured. Two years later, he had a second heart attack. Subsequently, he lost everything he&#039;d worked his life for: his home, his life&#039;s savings, his small inheritance from my grandmother and grandaunt and he left his retirement and now lives in a tiny 1 room apartment, in florida, and works in a small office and will, has he always reminds, have to work the length of this days...everything that he&#039;d hoped to free himself and give his grandchildren, gone. though has i remind him continually, he has what is most important, his health and his family. 

A timely timely story in a moment and age when Americans, most americans, fail to see the failure o their nation in terms of protecting people from their most basic need: the welfare of their families....

a simple and unadorned and powerful story told with humility and grace.

thank you for sharing michael. I wish the Mallinger&#039;s strength and endurance and love...


bob</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael: :)))</p>
<p>first of all, a big congratulations on publishing the Mallinger family story. I too was deeply moved by the photographs for both photographic/emotional reasons and personal. Some of the most moving and powerful photographs wrung my heart, as given the context, we&#8217;re left realing from the sadness and weight and tremendous responsibility of caring for a loved one, losing a loved one and still trying to bully up the foundations of the life that had been set in place. The photograph of Mr. Mallinger sitting on the examination table is an extraordinary one&#8230;everything that this story conveys and contains is suggested in that image: his wife&#8217;s mortality, his loneliness, the weight of the burden of the circumstanes, his own mortality, his herculian strength and the expression caught in the hunch of his brows, and the his determination and will to shoulder this and to resist despair&#8230;it is an extraordinary image of a profund moment&#8230;..</p>
<p>Not only was i moved by their story and difficulty, but i felt the text was important too. While the focus of the image is the illness of Mrs. Mallinger, and that this entails, we do get resonances of other consequences, which sneak into the images&#8230;the extraordiary opening image, as if the House of Usher, with Mr. Mallinger and his son, the condo steeped in shadow and dreary rain slick light, sitting alone beneath the very-florida-condo painting, the dual reflection on the lanai porch&#8230;.all of this suggests that what was once a support (the home) for this family, bares the risk of salvaging away&#8230;.And the text absolutely contextualized for me the additional consequnces of this family&#8217;s tremendous ill fortune. Actually, i did NOT want pictures that literalize the financial crisis, because once you&#8217;ve offered that to us in the way of background, we see it there in the images&#8230;for example photo #6&#8230;and elsewhere, small pivots of detail, that once i knew the backstory made perfect sense&#8230;for me, a good text should never explain pictures per se, but provide either detail that is additional/supplementary or poetic reaction. I&#8217;m thinkin of that remarkable story that Tom Hyde shaed with us (and was posted a A Photo Editor) about the multimple amputee in virginia. the 10,000 word essay provided additinal information that was not &#8216;in the pictures&#8217; but allowed us to dig further into the story of that young woman&#8217;s remarkable ordeal. So too here. The most significant event is unfolding in front of our eyes, and you, as a journalist, have shared with us the additional consequences of this family&#8217;s ordeal, something that not everyone would immediately understand&#8230;for me, the best of texts surves to add, to supplement, to compliment images, to offer a double narrative: that of the spoken and that of the visual&#8230;.and i received both here&#8230;.</p>
<p>I hope you continue to keep us posted on the journey that this family endures and i wish them the best. On a personal note, this story hit profoundly close to home. In 1999, my father had a major heart attack and he was uninsured. Two years later, he had a second heart attack. Subsequently, he lost everything he&#8217;d worked his life for: his home, his life&#8217;s savings, his small inheritance from my grandmother and grandaunt and he left his retirement and now lives in a tiny 1 room apartment, in florida, and works in a small office and will, has he always reminds, have to work the length of this days&#8230;everything that he&#8217;d hoped to free himself and give his grandchildren, gone. though has i remind him continually, he has what is most important, his health and his family. </p>
<p>A timely timely story in a moment and age when Americans, most americans, fail to see the failure o their nation in terms of protecting people from their most basic need: the welfare of their families&#8230;.</p>
<p>a simple and unadorned and powerful story told with humility and grace.</p>
<p>thank you for sharing michael. I wish the Mallinger&#8217;s strength and endurance and love&#8230;</p>
<p>bob</p>
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		<title>By: Gustav Liliequist</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gustav Liliequist</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 11:14:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lovely work. You convey a situation of love and dispair very well in only 13 frames. To me the photos are well in line with your statement.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lovely work. You convey a situation of love and dispair very well in only 13 frames. To me the photos are well in line with your statement.</p>
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		<title>By: audrey bardou</title>
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		<dc:creator>audrey bardou</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 06:17:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Few months ago, I saw a similar report: a couple had lost everything because of the cancer of his wife. They had worked all their life, I believe that she was an editor in a magazine, she had a good income, and the assurance did not any more want to cover them... they lost everything their house, she, her job... because expensive medical care which are at their expense... they went to live at their daughter and they felt that they were not welcome...
I like your work, it is a story so sad and so common, I like that the text does not tell the same thing as the images, otherwise what interest to read it.
thanks for sharing,
all the best, 
audrey</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Few months ago, I saw a similar report: a couple had lost everything because of the cancer of his wife. They had worked all their life, I believe that she was an editor in a magazine, she had a good income, and the assurance did not any more want to cover them&#8230; they lost everything their house, she, her job&#8230; because expensive medical care which are at their expense&#8230; they went to live at their daughter and they felt that they were not welcome&#8230;<br />
I like your work, it is a story so sad and so common, I like that the text does not tell the same thing as the images, otherwise what interest to read it.<br />
thanks for sharing,<br />
all the best,<br />
audrey</p>
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		<title>By: Herve</title>
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		<dc:creator>Herve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 05:58:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fine work, Michael. 

Though I do agree with the comments that the pictures themselves do not tell the story in the text (about middle class going broke &quot;just like that&quot;). Basically, if Howard still had his home and the insurance to cover the costs of illness, every picture would still be valid.  Like Patricia did, I think it is a point well worth bringing about.

I must also say that my first reaction (to the text) is :  what is the story behind them not being insured, or not being covered, not having some medicare kick in? This is my main problem with the essay: we are made to feel as if Howard&#039;s case needs no such specific information. Just as we would, rightly so this time, need no specific behind the picture of a starving orphan ina country ravaged by war.     

I also agree with Marcin. More than 71% in the world do not even have paychecks, or medicare. With no recourse to bankruptcy as well, needless say.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fine work, Michael. </p>
<p>Though I do agree with the comments that the pictures themselves do not tell the story in the text (about middle class going broke &#8220;just like that&#8221;). Basically, if Howard still had his home and the insurance to cover the costs of illness, every picture would still be valid.  Like Patricia did, I think it is a point well worth bringing about.</p>
<p>I must also say that my first reaction (to the text) is :  what is the story behind them not being insured, or not being covered, not having some medicare kick in? This is my main problem with the essay: we are made to feel as if Howard&#8217;s case needs no such specific information. Just as we would, rightly so this time, need no specific behind the picture of a starving orphan ina country ravaged by war.     </p>
<p>I also agree with Marcin. More than 71% in the world do not even have paychecks, or medicare. With no recourse to bankruptcy as well, needless say.</p>
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		<title>By: wendy</title>
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		<dc:creator>wendy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 04:08:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>intimate...
felt as if I was listening 
to a secret....
emotion
and
depth....
black
and
white.....
loss
and
death....
a true document,
to be
forever
cherished
and
adored....
xox
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>intimate&#8230;<br />
felt as if I was listening<br />
to a secret&#8230;.<br />
emotion<br />
and<br />
depth&#8230;.<br />
black<br />
and<br />
white&#8230;..<br />
loss<br />
and<br />
death&#8230;.<br />
a true document,<br />
to be<br />
forever<br />
cherished<br />
and<br />
adored&#8230;.<br />
xox<br />
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		<title>By: david alan harvey</title>
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		<dc:creator>david alan harvey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 02:37:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>PATRICIA...

you may remember that when we were editing Falling Into Place there were some very important things in your mind and in your life that just did not pictures make....most great essays are very very narrow in their photographic representations of all that may be deemed &quot;important&quot;...pull your favorite books off the shelf  ...make a list of facts hypothetically pertinent to that book...i think you will see what i mean....most great books show only a small part of the &quot;whole story&quot; as does your book...

particularly in pure photojournalistic essays, as Michael&#039;s,  which are generally a marriage of words and pictures...and like any marriage, there are different roles to play....words do some things, pictures do others...

of course, if Michael had a very strong picture that somehow represented the financial situation he is in or the fact that his electricity is off, then surely that would be fine...but, by your own words, you were struck by the visual essay itself until you read the text and then you started wanting more, not based on emotional grounds but on academic grounds......surely a gratuitous picture of Howard looking at his bills would certainly not work even if the financial situation is an important fact in his life...photographers would do well to not think of the a, b, c&#039;s of anything...

think about this...the strongest photographs in this essay are not something you probably would have thought about by reading words and making a list..

for example,  take the picture of Howard sitting on the examining table..such a strong photograph, yet not purely &quot;illustrative&quot; of anything said in words...if you had read Michaels words , i doubt you would have said &quot;hmmmm, Michael i think you should have a picture of Howard sitting on an examining table&quot;...that picture came from being a sensitive photographer , being visual,  not from ticking off a list....

photographers should of course be aware of all of the &quot;facts&quot;, yet i do not think every single fact requires an accompanying photograph...the very best photographs do what words can never do and the very best words do what photographs can never do... 

you wrote &quot;To me, the story told in that wordless way was powerful enough.&quot;...i think perhaps you were right the first time... 

cheers, david</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>PATRICIA&#8230;</p>
<p>you may remember that when we were editing Falling Into Place there were some very important things in your mind and in your life that just did not pictures make&#8230;.most great essays are very very narrow in their photographic representations of all that may be deemed &#8220;important&#8221;&#8230;pull your favorite books off the shelf  &#8230;make a list of facts hypothetically pertinent to that book&#8230;i think you will see what i mean&#8230;.most great books show only a small part of the &#8220;whole story&#8221; as does your book&#8230;</p>
<p>particularly in pure photojournalistic essays, as Michael&#8217;s,  which are generally a marriage of words and pictures&#8230;and like any marriage, there are different roles to play&#8230;.words do some things, pictures do others&#8230;</p>
<p>of course, if Michael had a very strong picture that somehow represented the financial situation he is in or the fact that his electricity is off, then surely that would be fine&#8230;but, by your own words, you were struck by the visual essay itself until you read the text and then you started wanting more, not based on emotional grounds but on academic grounds&#8230;&#8230;surely a gratuitous picture of Howard looking at his bills would certainly not work even if the financial situation is an important fact in his life&#8230;photographers would do well to not think of the a, b, c&#8217;s of anything&#8230;</p>
<p>think about this&#8230;the strongest photographs in this essay are not something you probably would have thought about by reading words and making a list..</p>
<p>for example,  take the picture of Howard sitting on the examining table..such a strong photograph, yet not purely &#8220;illustrative&#8221; of anything said in words&#8230;if you had read Michaels words , i doubt you would have said &#8220;hmmmm, Michael i think you should have a picture of Howard sitting on an examining table&#8221;&#8230;that picture came from being a sensitive photographer , being visual,  not from ticking off a list&#8230;.</p>
<p>photographers should of course be aware of all of the &#8220;facts&#8221;, yet i do not think every single fact requires an accompanying photograph&#8230;the very best photographs do what words can never do and the very best words do what photographs can never do&#8230; </p>
<p>you wrote &#8220;To me, the story told in that wordless way was powerful enough.&#8221;&#8230;i think perhaps you were right the first time&#8230; </p>
<p>cheers, david</p>
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		<title>By: kathleen fonseca</title>
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		<dc:creator>kathleen fonseca</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 01:47:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>unbearably sad...i can´t even imagine. wonderful work. thank you..

best
kathleen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>unbearably sad&#8230;i can´t even imagine. wonderful work. thank you..</p>
<p>best<br />
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		<title>By: Patricia Lay-Dorsey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Patricia Lay-Dorsey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 01:25:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michael, I looked at your photos before reading the text. The story your images told touched me deeply. They told of the love of a man for a woman who is obviously quite ill and either in a hospital or nursing facility. I felt his deep sadness in every frame. For some reason the one that really got under my skin was of him sitting on the examining table. This made me realize he has health problems of his own. I saw their sons with their faces set in masks of endurance. Yet the woman&#039;s face never showed a change of expression, making me wonder if her illness had mental as well as physical components.

All that is what I saw by simply looking at your photos with no background or explanation. To me, the story told in that wordless way was powerful enough.

So then I read your text. Yes, it filled out the picture and made their situation even more heartwrenching, but I wished you&#039;d been able to show hints of the financial crisis in images rather than in words alone. Would this still be possible? Even a picture of him looking over the bills might help. Is his electricity still off? If so, how could you show that?

Any details you can show to help the viewer see the connection between this man&#039;s situation and the economic crisis would enrich the essay, so you don&#039;t have to depend solely on your text to tell that part of the story. 

Your photography is superb. Thank you for taking on such a timely subject and giving it a human face.

Patricia</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael, I looked at your photos before reading the text. The story your images told touched me deeply. They told of the love of a man for a woman who is obviously quite ill and either in a hospital or nursing facility. I felt his deep sadness in every frame. For some reason the one that really got under my skin was of him sitting on the examining table. This made me realize he has health problems of his own. I saw their sons with their faces set in masks of endurance. Yet the woman&#8217;s face never showed a change of expression, making me wonder if her illness had mental as well as physical components.</p>
<p>All that is what I saw by simply looking at your photos with no background or explanation. To me, the story told in that wordless way was powerful enough.</p>
<p>So then I read your text. Yes, it filled out the picture and made their situation even more heartwrenching, but I wished you&#8217;d been able to show hints of the financial crisis in images rather than in words alone. Would this still be possible? Even a picture of him looking over the bills might help. Is his electricity still off? If so, how could you show that?</p>
<p>Any details you can show to help the viewer see the connection between this man&#8217;s situation and the economic crisis would enrich the essay, so you don&#8217;t have to depend solely on your text to tell that part of the story. </p>
<p>Your photography is superb. Thank you for taking on such a timely subject and giving it a human face.</p>
<p>Patricia</p>
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		<title>By: Jason_Houge</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jason_Houge</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 01:20:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fantastic Story. So sad... Terrifying future
Well photographed... wow</description>
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Well photographed&#8230; wow</p>
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